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You know, I'm always told,
To beware of the cold!
My mother without any hitch,
New sweaters she would stitch.

She'd give me a cup of brew,
And warn me about the flu.
"Don't worry", I'd say
But still get the sniffles, the next day.

She would wrap my scarf tight,
And warm my blanket at night.
She gives me my ear muffs,
And warns me with a threatening huff.

I'd impatiently roll my eyes,
Even though she was wise...
I carelessly chose to ignore
And alas, now my throat is sore.

I idly hear the clock tick,
As I lay in bed, sick.
She brings in some soup,
Scolding in a never-ending loop.

"You should've been careful!"
She tells me I'm quite the handful...
She sighs and puts her hand on my head.
She then tells me to go to bed.

And just as she is about to go,
She mouths, "I told you so".
And shuts the door tight,
Without even saying goodnight.

All through the night I wheeze,
Cough, sniff, sweat and sneeze.
That's why, I've always been told:
To beware of the cold.
:iconamiheartsyou:
So I've been having high fever these past few days, but I think mama probably has been having the hardest time with all of it. :iconorzplz:

I know she'll probably never ever read this, buh this is for her. :heart:
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:iconserenecyrene:
*SereneCyrene Mar 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Hello, your amazing work has been featured here! [link] :floating:
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~AmiHeartsYou Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my God, thank you so much! :iconuhuhuhuplz:
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*SereneCyrene Mar 30, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem my friend! :shamrock:
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:icongirasolia:
=Girasolia Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
I just had a really bad cold a week ago :C
Hope you get better soon~

I loved this by the way; you should write poetry more often :meow: Mine always ends up really depressed LOL
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~AmiHeartsYou Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
Aaa I'm better now!
How 'bout you, sweetie?

Aaaa, thank you! :heart: I don't know, hmm... I'll see heee? :dummy:
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:icongirasolia:
=Girasolia Feb 9, 2013  Student General Artist
I got better but then came down with another cold OTL

Okay~ :la:
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~Hi-Hikari-Byouga Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You made it sound like your immune system = Wally :iconwhutplz:
get better soon dearie:iconaawplz:
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~AmiHeartsYou Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
IT IS LIKE WALLY'S
I MEAN, EVER SINCE I WAS A CHILD I WAS ALWAYS IN THE HOSPITAL

Aaa im better now, sweetie.
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!YueKiseki17 Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Dude. Your immune system sucks ; w ;

Don't worry, a bit of medicine *coughDrugs!cough*, a bit of sleep, and you'll be up and at 'em in no time :) Or at least until the virus cells inside your body mutate again :iconohgodwhyplz:
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~AmiHeartsYou Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
Aaaa I'm good now, sweetie! :heart:
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